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Feb 22, 2012
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SOGNSVANN WALK
SOGNSVANN WALK
Shy smile,
passing young girl,
wide view,
lazy dog walking,
a beer top,
dripping branches,
ploop in a dark pool,
leaves gathered
floating
edge of the lake,
a lacy condom
hangs,
mossy stones
slippery,
roots like steps,
the sudden rush
of a squirrel up a nearby
fir tree,
a cormorant sitting silent
at the end of a wooden pier;
the cry of a bird of prey
one leaf dances down,
glancing on branches
as it falls,
yellow birch leaves
caught like treasure,
gold,
the calm water,
ballroom of trees
reflected across the lake.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Margaret Ann Waddicor October 2011
Style/Type: Free verse
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 5 months ago
Dear Ann,
the calm water,
ballroom of trees
reflected across the lake.
loved these lines! too bad the beer top and condom spoiled the balance of nature. But people are pigs and seem to think the earth is theirs to litter without consequences :(
always, Cat
weirdelf
13 years 5 months ago
An impressionist poem in the finest sense.
Gaugin would be proud.