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Feb 28, 2012
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Anti thesis
govern love
heart shaped box
I lock her in
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
13 years 4 months ago
no boundaries for love
she sighs like a sirens call
reaching through walls
kept prisoner
recipient echo
manna for the famished
when visions speak
she is freedom
William Saint George
13 years 4 months ago
Great
Esker. I love this poem. If it does not include the comment/poem (and why do you always do that, btw?) It is perfect.
Esker
13 years 4 months ago
Thank You for loving this!
its a rather simple poem
but even one that I cannot help
but to look back on and comment also
its that great joy of poetry isnt it
expression and that freedom
no matter how it is that
sometimes humanity wants
to put the poet and poetry
in tidy little boxes and make
it behave
it is not to be
passion like artist abilities
knows no boundaries
Thank You!
weirdelf
13 years 4 months ago
Your poem was perfect
without your after comment.
I've said this before, it's not about rules or boxes, it's about giving the gift freely of your poetry.
If we rated in stars like the old days I would have given 5 for the poem and reduced it to one for your after comment.
Esker
13 years 4 months ago
No more stars anymore
and thank You for the one star
I shall keep up the good work!
(I was lucky enough to see
the star rating system on Neo
old....This system works much
better..)
I would give my comment a three
star high five...!