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Mar 02, 2012
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Warfare
Very true
In war
none is ever killed by a bullet
as all fire in the darkness
only shells wound.....
snipers are not worth their salt
if they don't kill
one for one,
may be injure another
with the same single bullet
Ricocheted
I am thus.....
each poem of mine
must touch the heart
in such a manner
that tears must flow
else, my poetry ought to blow
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years 4 months ago
Dear Loved,
each poem of mine
must touch the heart
in such a manner
that tears must flow
else, my poetry ought to blow
I feel about poetry as you do. This is my wish too.
always, Cat
loved
13 years 4 months ago
Yes Cat, yours does
but I have yet to attain
that state or stage.
Thanks