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Apr 26, 2012
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Once you all switch to Free verse things will get worse
ONCE YOU ALL SWITCH TO FREE VERSE THINGS WILL GET
Worse
a curse
Loved has made all forget
what was poetry and verse
and the bestest critique we all know ,
will my cruci-fixation rehearse
ere that happens guys go back to your archaicity
and
leave my precious verse to and for me..
i must thank thee
if you want to see
the bard survive in me..
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Rula
13 years 2 months ago
Loved
I know exactly where did this come from
and from here I echo your words..
"ere that happens guys go back to your archaicity
leave my precious verse to and for me.."
loved
13 years 2 months ago
I find not many are into FREE verse
am I wasting my poetic freedom
to converse
in verse?
which falls under no pattern?
Let it be,
its my creativity,
read if you please.
You may consign it
if it does so you displease...