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Apr 27, 2012
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You scratch....
You scratch my back
and
I will yours
you continue to read me as
I always do yours
and
then why compose poetry
may I ask of you?
as not any,
if at all not many
read ……
why should I post one
for none to breed?
as I might as well write ........and compose
music it to my ears
ere I myself to the garbage bin
my bed
do dispassionately ...............dispose.
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
13 years 2 months ago
scratch, scratch
there you go loved
lol - 'ere I myself to the garbage bin'
- no i don't think so
bed is better
love judy
xxx
emogothgirl
13 years 2 months ago
HA hello world, this is loved...
you hear that neo? BURN.
loved it
mag
loved
13 years 2 months ago
Beautiful world,brief
precise
you cut each one to size
that's no surprise
emoth ...
you walk away with the first prize...
emogothgirl
13 years 2 months ago
well
not so sure what you mean, SO
while i admit i don't comment much anymore, i will counter with the fact that i don't find anything of much interest. and no excuses, i should be reading more. but i get next to no comments myself. although we don't write for commentary, do we?
loved
13 years 2 months ago
A comment is like kerosine or petro
which ...adds up like a flame
and
then the true poet comes out ...
with a new game
and
rests upon his shoulders
a new love... that emerges...
like the poetry above..