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Let
Let our lips meet some day, like these ..oh how sweet thy lips upon mine ...oh what a treat ...
then two angels from the outside world shall retreat ...
to in the far folds of eternity to meet ...
and
then devour each other..
hour by hour ...
till in our bones remains no more power...
and then the two entwined ,are taken away by divine... to a lovers paradise ... if there be one..
and the world of lovers ...shall in our glamour... compose romantic poetry...
like
Romeo and Juliet ..
the two of us shall be....
Brown hair blue eyes
She has brown hair
that makes me stare
her eyes are like blue
like I see the lotus hue...
she looks so fair
and
does at me glare
then as she stares
she ruffles my hair
I have very little in any case
I will not mind
if she pulls the rest
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
13 years 2 months ago
lol
love it loved
and love the finish
made me smile
love judy
xxx
loved
13 years 2 months ago
thanks Judy
I composed that over two years ago
glad you smirked
Candlewitch
13 years 2 months ago
Dear Loved,
You are a wonderful storyteller with the written word! Loved this!
and the last lines gave me a chuckle:
I have very little in any case
I will not mind
if she pulls the rest
always, Cat
loved
13 years 2 months ago
Cat ,you are the most wonderful
as those who praise
and appreciate
are exalted in human eye,
you are such a one
Thanks,Cat