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May 02, 2012
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Clean? (A little rant)
Why don't you wash your weary thoughts,
and brush out your heavy woes and pains.
Wipe out those tears in eyes,
and sweep everyday's miseries away.
Bleach all the stained ,
and the spotted hatreds in your heart
clean it all and say:
Hey..
"Everything is gonna be OKAY."
About This Poem
Last Few Words: An old write, thought I'd share it with you as a lightsome little piece...Hope you enjoy.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Ian.T
13 years 2 months ago
Rula
I will have another go at cleaning up lol. Loved the simplicity of this write for such a big job, Yours Ian.T
Rula
13 years 2 months ago
Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy
Thanks dear Ian ..I am happy you've dusted this piece and gave it
a tidy L00k...Appreciated:-)