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The Fall

The Fall
I just fell from a precipice.... though not too high...
fell on the back of my flat head...
heavens saved me
you want to know why?
coz I have yet to compose poems
without a score
and
many will learn from me.....all the more

Two things in life are for certain

CALAMITY

and

OPPORTUNITY

always come unannounced

Curtain!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

judyanne

13 years 2 months ago

lol

you are such a funny person loved
i hope calamity didn't hurt your head too much
at least it gave you the opportunity to tell us about it :)
love judy
xxxx

loved

13 years 2 months ago

No there was a thunder...

No there was a thunder... all asunder
I couldn't salvage myself
but to get on my two feet
was helped

now I'm keeping myself under surveillance
for seventy two hours....... I know nothing will happen ...
as this wasn't the first occasion .

I'm adept to face head injuries
but they also are scared of me.........hahahahaa..
Shall be able to give a detailed report
much ,much later may be ,
just wait and do see...

scribbler

13 years 2 months ago

Hi loved

perhaps it's all that falling which flattened your noggin lol.............stan

loved

13 years 2 months ago

yeah you bet it helped

head injuries are a great cure
for many a malady.
just believe me..
see you after seventy two hours .
simply pray for me..
of course you will have to
wait and see....

Candlewitch

13 years 2 months ago

Dear Loved,

very humorous with a touch of truth added. I love secret ingredients!

always, Cat

loved

13 years 2 months ago

Thanks Cat,it is very much

humorously truthful....
So far so good
but another few hours
of self observation will do.
Hopefully I shall compose my thanks
for the concern to all of you.

Ian.T

13 years 2 months ago

Loved

I would have fetched you a drink of water
it would have saved you from going with Jill
I knew you shouldn't ought'r.
It is Jacks job don't you see
It was his crown that was to be broken
Now what can I tell the kids their rhyme is bespoken
By a young bard that wanted an affair
With a young Jill with golden hair
Get real man and get off that hill
Ha! Ha! I am laughing still,
Yours Sparrow, that bids you no ill

loved

13 years 2 months ago

how I wish twas a story ..of Jack and the HIll

sorry ,
I meant Jill
but twas a minor roadside hill
where i fell to my head till
and
failed to pay my electricity bill
ere they threaten me with
a bit of lightening
which they after all did
and the bard is alive still
friend my Ian ...to kill

temidayo

13 years 2 months ago

hmmm

liked the bit on the inevitable being both calamity and opportunity,well I knew death,tax are popular inevitables now I add calamity and opportunity to the list. well do heal well. loved

loved

13 years 2 months ago

Thanks

healed and survived
more than 72 hours
So read on newer stuff hence.

loved

12 years 10 months ago

Add on to any taxes

we all have to pay
a PRICE
for any PRIZE