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May 06, 2012
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You would ride out
it was there
when you changed colour
and between sleep and awake
I loved every word
you would ride out and pick bumblebees
your dreaming dizziness
like a mad happy
slot machine
we had a coffee party behind your closed eyelids
to just hear
and caress the edge of your imagination
to feel you as happiness
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
13 years 2 months ago
hi ester
really, this write makes no sense to me
- but i still love the images it gives me
especially
'we had a coffee party behind your closed eyelids
....to just hear
and caress the edge of your imagination
to feel you as happiness'
love judy
Cloudthings
13 years 2 months ago
beautifully penned with all the imagery left just elusive enough
Ester, this is a delight, beautifully penned with all the imagery left just elusive enough to create an incredible play among what you spread.... It's like a divine picnic of memory snippets to me & so very nostalgic. It just filled me up with joy & longing & just a touch of melancholy in the gaps.
I would have been so happy to have written this one!
Ester
12 years 9 months ago
Thankyou. E
Thankyou.
E
Esker
13 years 2 months ago
meridian
the tumble of the wheel
the glee of dusk
on her slope against the
wall of atmosphere
star rise
fathoming through
meridians deep
Thank You
your poems are a walk
in dazzling calm lament
Ester
12 years 9 months ago
Thank you Esker. E.
Thank you Esker.
E.