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Mason Jar Flowers

morning
barefoot
linoleum
screeching
reaching
for a bowl
toking
'til crispy
crash
landing
in a rocking chair
to ponder on
...flowers
why not
I dare
who cares
I'm off the grid
cast anew
pots and pans
bullet proof
iron age
mugs and jugs
a leaky roof
cleans the rugs
broken latch
been like that
it'sokay
ai'no thugs

begonias!

I'll whack her a batch
for lunch

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: upstate New York USA, USA

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Comments

brittle light

brittle light

13 years ago

hello Cat

Hope the "like a smack in the head" didn't give you "like a headache"!

thank you for all the times you have commented and critiqued
I appreciate it.

Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

13 years ago

I love,

I love the title, And the poetry never disappoints. I to like the trickle down effect. Nice poem. Regards Roscoe..