lips divine modernised

The kiss,
lips are divine
they are fine
but none on this earth
can lips
of my kind
ever find

I wear no mask
for I love the task
just kiss me
like a fairy
and see
how love flows
from my lips to glee
this kiss was lovely
didn’t you see?

a sweet lovers kiss
is absolutely free

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Ian.T

13 years ago

Loved

a soppy love of kissing and being with love, Loved it, just for its childlike expression, Yours Ian.T

loved

13 years ago

at times its nice

to be a child
how so ever sloppy
part of humour in life
glad you didn't have to wipe..

Esker

13 years ago

GUSTAV KLIMPT

"The Kiss"
was Art Noveau style at the turn of the century Loved

I hear the yearning in your poems the earnest
desire enriched in your style
and how many walk about this way
like a wave crest seeking
restless and unabated
Fill your poetry with want Loved
and I shall read
you are alive my Poet friend

feeling desiring describing

You are open Not flippy faced
like the reality here in my city
Smiles today and jilt you the next

I read you and throw you comments

loved

13 years ago

great words poetically framed accepted with grace

''''Fill your poetry with want Loved
and I shall read
you are alive ..................................still or yet?
my Poet friend.....................

kindly do read Ifan,
my dear Esker