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Jun 13, 2012
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times toll
even sleep has an element of time,
for you just awake
after a short and sweet
slumber
and
then you enter
into a no -time zone
if you don't rise again...
till then sleep
and
un-sleep
as usual,
till dreams do over take,
as you enter the timelessness zone
and
about that there is
absolutely,
no mistake.
till then sleep
and
if you desire awake
when the
spirit! is ready
it will come
and
it shall you finally
on its wings take...
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Candlewitch
13 years ago
Dear Loved,
I used to hate sleep... I saw it as mini deaths. Time has changed me and my views. Sleep is a necessary evil for it recharges us.
love, Cat
loved
13 years ago
Even sleep has an element of time,
its a must
else we will rust
and u haven;t yet read my
IFAN .... Cat