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Esker
Esker
Jun 18, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

T O R R E N T I A L . . G U I S E

weary rise
patina soft

and light falls in
sideways

evaluation
all consideration
costs

turn mists to humid
sunrise

The curve of night
is sleeping

and beams of stars
have gathered

where happiness
lived

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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north ontario, CAN

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Roscoe Lane

Roscoe Lane

13 years ago

Being early,

Being that it is early morning here i can picture your poem as i read through. Unfortunately it's only a picture in my head, as the weather here is dreadful. Great poem with beautifully discribed images, dreamlike. Regards Roscoe..

Nordic cloud

Nordic cloud

13 years ago

Arpeggios

Your bent, the curve,
a guise that like the clouds
can dissipate,

can change their shape
can cast out diagonal rain drops
beat arpeggios

of rhythmical decisions
rise in sunbeams
a misty dust of tiny stars,

astonish,
colour,
blaze the sky of our brains,
the inner heights
of the human skull,

hovering there
to impress our synapses
with the beauty
of this life.

Takk Steven Wolf.

Esker

Esker

13 years ago

Thank You

I have forgotten what this was
or reference too

a state of thinking
neither past nor present

a lucidity caught between a dream
and a reality