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Geremia
Geremia
Jun 22, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

BARREN NIGHTS

BARREN NIGHTS

The night came upon me
barren
no nurturing light
no warmth in its darkness
stars veiled in black embrace
meaningless to its own existence.
mirrored reflection....

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loved

loved

13 years ago

nice one

'''stars veiled in black embrace.....
nice choice of words too

Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years ago

Joe

I like this one as an intro to more, you have given us a glimpse of one part of being there and as Loved said the words chosen are good..
I just felt that there is more to this one, Yours Ian.T