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Dec 13, 2010
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Spirals
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a spiral is a nice shape
round and round
up and down
three dimensional too
circles, they're ok
lines are cool
but, spirals-------------
-----(here, speechless)---
springy
active
and playful
dancing,
in graceful formulas,
spaciousness
and wonder
spirals wind,
and rewind
and remind me
of the universe
and my connection
with the ALL
and this,
by definition,
definitly
includes
you!
About This Poem
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Frederick Kesner
14 years 7 months ago
A thing of beauty
Reminds me of a well loved slinky or shock absorber springs, perhaps even spiral noodles! Playful and full of life. A very fun poem to read and explore. Far too many serious poems out. Thanks for sharing AL!
brittle light
14 years 7 months ago
thanks, cb
yes, sometimes I do weary of so many serious, and downright depressing poems. They are beautifully written at times, and quite humanly relevent, but ....fun is good too! variety being the spice of life....yes?
thanks again
Frederick Kesner
14 years 6 months ago
Yes!
Of course, YES! And more they may flourish :-))