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scribbler
Dec 13, 2010 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

GOLDEN BALLERINA

I am posting this Haiku today and will expand into three other forms tomorrow

A lone poplar leaf
swirling in an autumn wind
a golden ballet

Tomorrow will post i Western Classic, Free Verse, and Parallel forms.............scribbler

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost, Burns, Longfellow, Poe, and Johnson. I guess you've noticed these are all past masters. Other than folks on site I don't read any contemporary poets .

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S

scribbler

14 years 7 months ago

oops!

I appreciate the early correction. You'd think with 10 fingers I could at least count to 5 lol....................................scribbler

S

scribbler

14 years 7 months ago

golden

Was your feet leaving due to poem or too much wine lol. thanks..................stan

mand

mand

14 years 7 months ago

Hiya Stan

Just lovely!!

Clever poet

Love Mand xxxxxx

S

scribbler

14 years 7 months ago

ballerina

hey mand. Sometimes a sight inspires and I don't know what form to use so I use multiple............stan