Kailashana2

Jul 17, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

I Thought I'd Think Your Thought

Excuse me
for interrupting
I'm just passing through
through the membrane
of your brain
just a thought, thinking of
passing through
like a memory
galloping into view

take me now

rein me in
and I'm yours or
leave me alone
as if I never was
a war child without a home

Nourish me with distance.
Blind me with your light.
Dance me from your insight
or take from me a brilliant bite.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Ohio, USA

Favorite Poets: Bokonon: “Let your life be the poem you write”. , I'm still writing.....

Comments

Candlewitch

13 years ago

Dear Anna,

Your imagination and mingled muse are a treasure to be valued and throughly enjoyed. Can't quote you favorite lines this time. But I can tell you that I marvel at how your mind works and spins out fine art.

always, Cat

Kailashana2

13 years ago

Is that a nice way of saying

Is that a nice way of saying that I'm crazy as a soup sandwich? ;-)

Thanks for the read, Cat. Hope all is well and blessed.

p.s.

Dingo dog says arf arf, Cat.

Rula

13 years ago

Such a romance

Which I think the first I read from you. Much like it Anna.:-) keep the good mood

Kailashana2

13 years ago

Haha. Romance? Not quite.

Haha. Romance? Not quite. Unless one talks to oneself. If it really is entertainment we seek, well, there's at least 7 billion *thinkers* *out there*. ;-)

I'm talking specifically of thoughts, Rula. How they enter our minds, what they are, and who the thinker is, really.

Did you know that a thought is no more than a chemical reaction in the brain? Something we have imprinted and believed to be real and true? Then accept it as *our own*?

~Anna

Roscoe Lane

13 years ago

I thought,

I thought i told you to hold that thought, and there you go, Sorry just funnin, we should treat each thought as our last, and run with them to see where they may lead. They shan't turn our heads no sir no indeed. Beginning of a song mmm? sorry just a thought. LOL. Love Roscoe..

Ian.T

13 years ago

Anna

Inside or outside you travel with ease, are we safe from your journey's walk.
Thought I felt something stir the other day, but sadly a memory not Anna lol Grand write there young lady, Yours Ian.T

weirdelf

13 years ago

avid,

oh yes,
avid.

judyanne

13 years ago

lol

you obviously take 'brilliant bites' from many of your thoughts anna

i love how your mind works sometimes
love judy
xxx