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Jul 19, 2012
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ABOUT RAINBOWS
ABOUT RAINBOWS
[In memory]
I’m sorry for the words
I never did say
and all the things
I didn’t do for you.
I’m sorry for the silent days
and my stubborn ways.
But most of all I’m sorry
you never did see
the rainbow in me.
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
scribbler
12 years 11 months ago
hi Joe
Beautiful as always............stan
scribbler
12 years 11 months ago
hi Joe
Beautiful as always............stan
Geremia
12 years 11 months ago
Thanks, Stan.
Thanks, Stan.
Thanks, Stan
Joe
Joe
:)
Ian.T
12 years 11 months ago
Joe
We did see a rainbow in you lol.
A lovely piece again young Joe, its a joy to have some people to walk with that teach many things and you are there Joe as we journey on, Yours Ian.T
Geremia
12 years 11 months ago
Thank you, Ian. We are each a
Thank you, Ian. We are each a variant of the same Archetype
weirdelf
12 years 11 months ago
This touched me deeply
When you nail it, Joe, you really nail it.
I can't help but think that anyone who failed to see the rainbow in you... well, it was probably their failing as much as yours.
Geremia
12 years 11 months ago
Thank you for that. joe
Thank you for that.
joe