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Jul 24, 2012 ⭐ View statistics (Premium feature)

Tinge

That entire one wants to see
must be beautiful,
colorful, spectacular too
a tinge of beauty
lips thin
eyes blue
rosy cheeks
wow a dimple too
a tint
of all that is desirous
of a feline you,
a smile
a cheer with a whiskyness, about you
your thoughts of ecstasy and love so true
a trace of every thing
those have you,
is all that what most of us want
to have of you
just a tinge!

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

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weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 12 months ago

oh! My mouth open with avid appreciation

"When she was good she was very very good,
when she was bad she was horrid"

You are a complex and beautiful poet at your best and I am deeply grateful that you persist.

"You're a better man than I am, Gunga Din"

weirdelf

weirdelf

12 years 12 months ago

Well, I know I am very good

and the bad of the worst.
The idea of expressing words to their utmost capability is my being.
Track me. I haven't written a good poem in a long time. I lost confidence in my ability to write poetry, because I thought I became dysfunctionally insane. And took psyche drugs that put cotton wool in my head and lost confidence in my ability. I still had the ability to help others, but that means nothing when I couldn't write good poetry. I feel lost. Felt lost. Maybe I will write some good poetry soon. Not maybe, I will. I lost my sense of my self. I lost the ability to love, have passion and write with passion and meaning.
I thought, in my lack of self confidence that I could not write poetry of value.
But it is coming back.
The nature of Jess is irrepressible.