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Jul 28, 2012
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A post depression haiku
If we could go back
would we ever have eaten
that stupid apple?
About This Poem
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
scribbler
12 years 11 months ago
hello
really good senryu.................stan
Barbara Writes
12 years 11 months ago
Nice senyru
The decision to eat was stupid lol. Everything looking good ain't good for you. Adam and Eve found out the hard way and we still paying for it.
WonderGolly
12 years 11 months ago
Good question. and my answer
Good question. and my answer is "yes"
man will eat the apple over and over again
that human nature. our imperfection is
the quality that truly defines our continues existence
as we keep on evolving in all aspects of life.
What is there to do in a perfect society?
beautiful right, short, simple and precise.
bless
Barbara Writes
12 years 11 months ago
lol
not get sick and die for one.