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Jul 30, 2012
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All Mine
Cynthia writes a poem
about the tigress being a lady,
I ask out loud, what choice
do us mere mortals have
between the tiger and the lady
when the tiger
is the lady?
Howsoever the snarl of victory
resonates
I am guilty of the unholy state
of digress,
baring my teeth and purring, changing my
stripes into miles of one-way smiles, stealing the lust
from your eyes and making it mine.
All mine.
About This Poem
Last Few Words: Inspired by Cynthia.
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Esker
12 years 11 months ago
Crafting
your writing is becoming sweeter
more leaner
and intentive
and I
apt attentive reader
watch
the sleek stripes
the humble purr
Thank You Kailashana!
Seren
12 years 11 months ago
Some awesome lines in this ..
Some awesome lines in this ..
I felt the sting in the second stanza awesome writing
Jc
Ian.T
12 years 11 months ago
Anna
I know I don't comment on your writing very often, it is because it is one of the best on Neo and I feel that the others need more than you, so I hope you will forgive.
Just accept that all of your poetry is near top class,
Yours Ian.T