Humour Still

Stilling!

You are still
As wonderful
As you ever were
I assure you
I will read you still

Today’s unintended theme
Is

Still

Hence all comments
May not be considered
As still
You are still
Too good
So be still
That we all know still
Twill
Be the best one still

All these comments are
For you still
Why do you ask still?
It does me still

I've always been in motion
Even now and still
Thanks friend
Still
I will be humorous
At will
As always
Still...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

Victorclaude

14 years 7 months ago

this made me think of a

this made me think of a whisky still
white lightnin'
roalin' out of mountain hollers
in cars that weren't still at all
noisy souped up cars runnin' from revenuers
who stayed to chop up their stills still dripping
200 proof
as shiners escaped
and still knew how to make another still
another night
another holler under
a still shining moon.

loved

14 years 7 months ago

thank you Claude

ur victorious

gr8888 comparison /analysis

i am content
STILL

loved

14 years 7 months ago

Poetry is

Still come by
Though you may still say
Silently
Something at your will
Still

Poetry is
An art of manipulating words
To make believe
Some are sincere
Others simply delve
To attract
As butterflies do
Pollen of flower
And
Bees, a hive
Ask Darwin if there is disbelief
For I tell no lies,
Love lies between you and me
The universe doth see
Longo readS my poetrs
Still come by
Though you may still say
Something at your will
Silently still