Tanka

friends are forever
come pen verses together
luminous poets

savor fresh ink when you write
Renga Neopoet Style

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Billy Collins, Shakespeare, , Emily Dickinson, , , Whitman, Jess Tapper

12 years 10 months ago

Barbra..I might join after finishing the workshops. My plate is really full

P.s Is the word sly a nice one? I mean it rhymes well with style but not sure about the meaning that it conveys

12 years 10 months ago

thanks i see what you mean. i dont know where my mind was when i looked this word up lol

i rechecked difinition and changed that line i hope this i much better. thanks for reading and critiquing it is really appreiate.

would love having you at the renga table. just one haiku or senyru verse. or a two line verse and you're done. all it takes is a minute or two.

looking foeward to seeing you there when you can.