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Sep 04, 2012
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B r o k e n .. S a f e l y ...
jaw land dirty world
compacts and candy
flaw across the scar of sun
cutting cross tender bone
the hip throne
I can hear your breath
the hitchs
crying through a phone
put me down babe
put me down
cruel safetys off
to let you cold fire finger
pull ventral ebullience
drip hesitant kisses
drop memory in park
let our idle agony
spill runaway
hearts
into the damned
and lost of dark
.........
About This Poem
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
judyanne
12 years 10 months ago
lol esker
you can do it by text these days - even safer
i love this
great imagery as usual
esker awesome
love judy
xxx
weirdelf
12 years 10 months ago
Tres chic
transcends text, condoms and handguns.
You at your best.
Yes, as you said to me recently, I do have a love/hate relationship with your poetry. I consider you one of the finest poets I have read, so can over-react when I feel disappointed. This one did not disappoint.