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potion
Member since July 8, 2008
Member for 17 years, 11 months
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Forbidden and Hidden
I am confused, broken and blank.
Staid because you are so close but I cannot touch.
My keeper keeping the distance I only long to be near.
Smiling like you need me and touch like you want me,
but I am fearful of returning the favor.
I long your hand to be in mine, sneaking a brush of your warm flesh.
Out of breath when I cannot serve you,
but this fantasy affair can only last so long.
He will be here soon and you can no longer be mine for I am his.
His wrath is my fear and love but you are my love and passion.
You are my hidden desire, and my forbidden sin I have already committed.
potion’s timeline
- July 2023
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07 FriAnniversary
15 years of membership
- July 2018
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07 SatAnniversary
10 years of membership
- July 2013
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07 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- August 2009
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29 SatReceived a critique
on Forbidden and Hidden from @Ravenshakti
"What a beautiful and passionate poem! It is imbued with elegance and a sensual fascination... A delicious combination! Potion... I remain, enthralled. Raven" -
28 Fri
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27 ThuReceived a critique
on Two Glass Tears from @Sourav
"Nicely written. Very emotionally charged up write. Enjoyed it!" -
27 ThuReceived a critique
on Two Glass Tears from @Seren
"This is the best write I have read of yours ... its a wonderful play on words ... love Jayne x x "We did not change as we grew older; we just became more clearly ourselves. Lynn Hall" ..." -
27 ThuPosted a poem
Two Glass Tears
"Dripping from my eyes like rain drops from the skytoo timid and shy to fight or try." -
23 SunPosted a poem
The Green Curtain
" Swaying in the wind on that summer daygreen like the grass not as the sun could portray." -
15 SatHighest posting month
August 2009 — 5 poems
- July 2009
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07 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- August 2008
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27 WedFirst critique offered
on "Rivers of blood" by @Michael Landau
- July 2008
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08 TueFirst publication
white
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07 MonJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
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