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Please join me in congratulating Sparrow as the November contest winner for PAST IT (Whatever It Is).
A light hearted look at oldsters' absent mindedness
Past it ( Whatever it is ) November Contest
Submitted by Sparrow on Sat, 2018-11-24 19:49
I am in a quandary
What has been happening to me?
I put my morning coffee away
In the fridge and there it stayed
I found it later in the day
As I was putting the cutlery away
Oh shit what is going on
How can I get everything so wrong?
Couldn’t find my glasses to see
Till I scratched my head
I should have stayed in my bed
But which room was my bed in.
I shouted for help as I always do
No good I remembered
I was on my own in this old house
As years ago I had left you.
If you know where I live
And you are just passing by
Drop in to see me
All I can do now, is raise a sigh..
weirdelf
6 years 7 months ago
Congrats Ian
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raj
6 years 7 months ago
Congrats Ian
a deserved winner..
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Sparrow
6 years 7 months ago
Stan and All
Many thanks for the win and the congrats, can't type much more as my fingers are not working lol.
At least I don't have to go on the cruise for second place lol
Love you all ,
Yours Sparrow
lovedly
6 years 7 months ago
wow
Finally you made it
before your fingers gave way
C O N G R A T S
IAN SIR
me bard