sweetspirit

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Sweet Kiss

Posted Aug 26, 2009 · 22 lines · 15 critiques

For I am but a simple soul

Though often unsure of whom I am
Still this I know deep within
without love I am not whole

my love is true and that I’ll not hide
‘Tis only truth I keep inside
because love’s loss I’ve felt once before
because of that

Oh, I will love thee even more

my gift may at first seem small
When I give, I do swear to give my all
For life spent loving not, you see
Is meaningless it seems to me

My gift I offer up to you

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Is my love shall ever be true
all I am is yours to keep
tender love to you I’ll make

Please take my hand release all your cares
And trust that our Goddess will lead us there
Love’s promise then simply is this
Forever feel my softest sweet kiss

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December 2009
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Received a critique
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"A pleasure to read. Mark "some things change, some things don't""
September 2009
12 Sat

Received a critique
on ~A Midnights Dream~ from @lyz
"Always such beauty in your writing. Speechless you have left me, not, Lol. This is, Exotic, Erotic, Hot and plenty of Love. And I loved it. Lyz XX"
August 2009
26 Wed

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Sweet Kiss

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Sweet Kiss
"For I am but a simple soul"
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~Poets In Time~
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July 2009
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First critique offered
on "~" by @2 Quills
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~My Pen~
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Sweet Kiss

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