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Trouble
Member since March 17, 2017
Member for 9 years, 2 months
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Monday was her name
Monday was her name
She would've encompassed, the smiles and cries
With the summary, of many week’s gone bye,
Her predecessor is the Sunday when I decide.
To let Monday be the beginning
of a better life.
Trust is a part Monday’s lies.
But Sunday is when the truth can survive.
Believing in thyself is always compromise.
A good night sleep will give you the direction
you need to find
Trouble’s timeline
- June 2026
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07 SunReceived a critique
on Monday was her name from @patrickgadoury
"Writing Monday poetry on a Sunday feels personally rude, so thanks for that. Jokes aside, I like the idea here. Monday almost feels like a person promising a better life, while Sunday is the last honest room before the…" -
07 SunReceived a critique
on STUPID OR IGNORANCE STUPID OR IGNORANCE from @patrickgadoury
"This feels like a rough thought-poem fighting with itself, which kind of fits the title. The line that hit hardest for me was “My stupidity, is my comprehension” because that actually feels like the heart of the piece…" -
07 Sun
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05 Fri
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02 TueReceived a critique
on If my face didn’t have a name from @Cpwe Skele
"Trouble, Clear and concise, I like how you were able to vividly describe your current/past state of mind. I would love to read more—if you would ever care to expand on it. Watch out for grammar. Thank you, Cpwe" - May 2026
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31 Sun
- July 2022
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15 FriHighest posting month
July 2022 — 5 poems
- March 2022
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17 ThuAnniversary
5 years of membership
- March 2018
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17 SatAnniversary
One year of membership
- March 2017
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30 Thu
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19 SunFirst critique offered
on "Merry Christmas Mama ( I post this every year)One more year..." by @Rett
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17 FriFirst publication
What the hell (since unpublished)
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17 FriJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
About me
To thy own self be true.
Location: Detroit Mi
Favorite Poets
my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music
Recent Work
We all choose to love
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I will stand by you
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Depression
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Believe
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I am no more or no less
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TO BE A MOUNTAIN
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