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Davut
Member since January 30, 2026
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THE RHETORIC OF THE CINNABAR
In his youth he was an intellectual macho
Then he read a wicked book and fell into depression.
The author was a suicidal boy close to graduation.
According to him we are all falling bodies
Attracted by the gravity of the future,
Saved by the extinction in the present.
For this he was nicknamed Buddha of the West
But the primal illuminated saved our guy:
If you think about your extinction, it is already not extinction.
He embraced this truth becoming a no-smile Buddha.
Davut’s timeline
- April 2026
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03 FriReceived a critique
on THE RHETORIC OF THE CINNABAR from @Jane A. Rug
"of the poet's sweeping themes, and perhaps my own challenges with flirtation with existential nihilism and ofttimes bouts recurring about suicidal ideation, the mention of depression caught my attention." - March 2026
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28 SatReceived a critique
on SONNET FOR BEATRICE LUNA from @Eliza
"for what I am thinking is your daughter? Is Beatrice Luna your daughter or an old lover? Luna is a beautiful name. I'm sure she would love this poem. Thank you for sharing" -
27 FriNew follower
@Lavender
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- February 2026
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20 FriReceived a critique
on YOU IN SEVEN WORDS from @Lavender
"Hello, Davut, I feel this is directed to a specific person, and I imagine it is spot on. The word "capturing" feels like the soul of the poem. Intriguing. Thank you, L" -
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15 SunReceived a critique
on THE HOLOGRAM from @Jane A. Rug
"i cannot find fault with the brevity, but more substantial lines could definitely add heft to an idea barely expounded, but certainly elaboration would be beneficial to flesh out the notion of what spurred this poem in…" -
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15 SunHighest posting month
February 2026 — 6 poems
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13 FriReceived a critique
on UNDER THE SKIN OF THE WORLD from @Lavender
"Hello, Davut, It seems this is speaking of reoccurring physical and social issues. I'll be back! Thank you, L" -
13 Fri
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10 Tue
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09 MonReceived a critique
on AT NIGHT ON LAPTOP from @Michael Anthony
"Big fan of brevity in poetry - well done!" -
09 Mon
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08 SunReceived a critique
on WOLVES OF THE STARS from @Lavender
"Hello, Duvat, Welcome! The more I read this, the more I like it. There is such a sobering element to it. I think the irony of its title is perfect. Thank you, Lavender" -
06 FriFirst publication
WOLVES OF THE STARS
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06 Fri
- January 2026
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30 FriJoined Neopoet
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First poem published 7 days later.
About Me
About me
I'm a poet who knows no borders. I am from Italy and I am inspired by my muse. My favorite poets are Dante, Leopardi and Montale. I would like my poems improve in english, in fact I usually write in italian.
Location: ITA
Recent Work
SEVEN DANGERS
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THE HOLOGRAM
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SENSORY DERANGEMENT QUEST
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AT NIGHT ON LAPTOP
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