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oldmanWil
Member since March 11, 2026
Member for 2 months, 29 days
courting pandora
a lake at the top of the mountain,
… a wellspring from which
all the love of the world would flow
were we in a reasonable world…
i wish i could bathe in you,
could swim in you,
drink of you.
feel your cleansing presence.
feel life surrounding,
drowning in your soft bliss
you are perfect…
always have been,
always will be,
…to me
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you are the wellspring of dreams.
desire comes as it will,
but having a focus of such singularity,
of such beauty,
causes an intensity that changes the world
of the imagination.
it creates a whirlpool in still waters,
it creates a wind over becalmed seas.
raise sails and on to sunset
well, pandora,
if you ever needed a new junk box
you know where to find me.
all of the coarse evils
have been beaten out of me
jealousy, spite, anger
but self doubt that compels courtesy,
and hope for a second date
springs eternal
within.
oldmanWil’s timeline
- March 2026
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24 TueReceived a critique
on courting pandora from @Geezer
"This is a love letter! A carefully gauged, well thought out probe into the feelings of another. Of course, it is possible that it is a statement of loyalty for your country and environment , but being the hopeless roman…" -
23 Mon
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11 Wed
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11 WedFirst publication
the hawk
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11 Wed
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11 WedJoined Neopoet
Membership begins
First poem published 1 days later.
About Me
been writing poetry since youth. studied literature until ran out of funds. work as a chef now. midlife crisis had me finding my voice. far more useful than sky-diving or a sports car.
proud canadian. amicably divorced dad with adult kids.
also been painting (outsider) for years...
Location: CAN
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