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Jun 16, 2018
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Bare Feet Walk
walking bare feet
they start talking
it's all live footage
of sensory images
screened over
flint, limestone, moss
documenting
laughter, grief, silence
of those who walked bare before
in darkness and light
thorn in the sole
becomes a memoir
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
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Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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