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Aug 27, 2018
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In the desert
Like hot coals on my feet I felt the desert sand As I walked barefoot I put my sandals on my feet My throat was parched with thirst I took a drink of water from the keg I had brought along My back pack felt heavy in my hands As I put it on my back strength I did not lack Not far to go soon see the tents arranged row by row With a hot meal and stories that appeal
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