Join the Neopoet online poetry workshop and community to improve as a writer, meet fellow poets, and showcase your work. Sign up, submit your poetry, and get started.
Friends!
Given the time together
it's just so easy to see.
The world is so much better
when you're here, can't you see.
Some friends just come and go,
but friends like you I'll keep!
No one said it was easy,
but you make it feel like a breeze.
I've encountered few better friends
than.the friendship I have with you!
I wish for your health constantly.
Nobody knows what the end.brings.
I hope it ends joyous for you!
Your family, they all love you.
Even those who you feel are estranged!
even though you have different views!
I know you'll never give up
on those who mean something to you.
You have a golden heart,
use it to bless those around you!
You possess a compass to happiness
use it to see others through!
The tragedy found here in life
will end for everyone soon.
If you have questions about your
own worth just look
Into his eyes and see,
You'll never forget his expression
A kindly glance of peace!
Guiding you into heaven
That place you've always
wanted to be!
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I wrote this for a dear friend who has an incurable disease!
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments