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Oct 21, 2022
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This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem Of The Week October 16th to October 22 2022
general malaise and some happiness
a big city n the fall has depressed parts of everyone there is joy in the sun
not usually cold sometimes we have to seach for any joy like watching squirells or birds
watching listening or t.v. music sports.anger like beeping horns cars goes with the malaise
About This Poem
Last Few Words: i hope people can enjoy this
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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