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Mar 29, 2018
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Life [Sunku]
Scramble,
unscramble
fill in the blanks
Decode
the abstract
essence of life
Truly
life is a
jigsaw puzzle
About This Poem
Review Request Direction: How does this theme appeal to you?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
raj
7 years 3 months ago
Hi Mark
Thanks for the read. I didn't understand your comment. Do you mean that you feel that this is not poetic and/or ^5 is to mean that in some line you find the syllable count not conforming to Snku? Will appreciate your clarification.
Regards...
raj
7 years 3 months ago
Thanks Mark
for coming back and providing clarifications
Regards...