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Jun 12, 2025
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Look who's talking
Look who's talking
Badly about me
He tells me that I am
A religious fanatic
That is wrong
Because that is not me
Also he doesn't know me that
Well
That is the truth
I was born a Christian
And I will die as a
Christian
Yes I pray every night
For my Father
Before I sleep
It only takes a few
Minutes to do it
About This Poem
Last Few Words: That is a new poem Written by me
Style/Type: Free verse
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