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Mar 29, 2025
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Lost At Sea
Never had I experienced such pain while at sea
Wondering if I would ever continue to be
The light was gone and the clouds solid black
Quickly dropping down seemingly ready to smack
The winds began blowing with terrible force
So I prayed that they would soon change course
The boat was shaking violently from side to side
And would not stop shaking no matter how I tried
Finally I prayed to God seeking His immediate aid
Waiting with tears in my eyes that change would be made
Then suddenly I could hear myself scream
As I tossed and turned from a frightful dream
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