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Jan 31, 2023
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maybe not
where has the bright love gone
it was almost gone
without me without you
who am i, just thinking about you
did you even love me back or
where does the glowing love go
i hope you don't go
i won't leave you i promised
and you said you'd soon have promised
wonder if you'll ever promise or
where is the sparkling love going
know i'm not going
know you're here with me forever
so know we're stuck here forever
but does anybody know for sure or
About This Poem
Last Few Words: heartache
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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