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Neopoem Of The Week Contest November 6th to November 12th 2022
Oxygen
Like a fish with no water is where I live oxygen is my name my friend as you settle in and take a hit of something you so want I start blazzin in with something so fresh and start and so hot chest rising faster and faster as do the thoughts might collopse right here on the spot brightness into darkness by just a bit drop has your so lifted high above as your body lies here to rot oxygen is my name have you forgot you can't live without me having me from the start I will remain hidden in the dark until the end I'll be with you my dear dear friend
About This Poem
Last Few Words: I came up with this poem poem because I'm a recovering addict
Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
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