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Scars Don't Fade Fast.

You don't tell me my arms are pretty when they are clean,
You just say they are ugly when they’re not.

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Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
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Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: yuma az

Favorite Poets: Neil Hilborn, Kevin Kantor,

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