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Sep 10, 2024
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SUMMER PASSION.
Beneath a boardwalk a girl and I
Naked would lay
Neath a summers's night sky;
Overlooking a beach
Where night birds call,
We kissed and caressed
Each exploring all.
This was the place boys took their desire
On warm summer nights
By a flickering fire,
Then under the boardwalk
Both would retreat,
Lay rampant with lust
'Till passions replete.
Oh! Those days so long gone
When troubles were few,
Not yet come to manhood
So little we knew;
Thought only of girls
Of the loving they fueled
Deep under the boardwalks
Where passion could rule.
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