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May 11, 2017
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WHEN TIME AND SPACE FISRT MET
A bound inseparable
Is what you brought to the table
Our love a dove exchange deal.
Peace, it signify but between us,
is a product of constant crisis
In time there is change
in space there is size
when time and space first met,
little was known
their union brought about so much change,
today what is not changed is
what has never been known
Creation takes time and space to
have its face
existence is in time and space
what is known is what is in time and space
oh how sad it is to know
time and space will last forever
and all created will last but just in time, will
leave the space and in time be a measure of time gone by
we all say good byes as passer byes
we are a product of time in space
time keeps us and takes us
when time and space met creation
started, GOD
About This Poem
Last Few Words: MY OPINION ON TIME AND SPACE
Style/Type: Structured: Eastern
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