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WORMONGERING

marjorie feels like a worm
burrowing, making me squirm
her hack trump attacks
are in fact, wacko acts
what she's packing is mole-e-o germs!

About This Poem

Last Few Words: More play on contemporary words and events. More internal rhyming!

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Lake Simcoe Canada

Favorite Poets: Poe, Frost, E.B. Browning, Theodor Seuss Geisel,

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