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Jun 10, 2025
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You should go down in your knees
You should go down on
Your knees
And thank you Father
For have made you
In his image
59 years ago
Also you should be glad
That you are one of
My Father's
Youngest child
Don't forget to go down on
Your knees and thank my Father
For your beautiful life
About This Poem
Last Few Words: That is a new poem Written by me
Style/Type: Free verse
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Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
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