ZARRANO

Member since June 6, 2011

Member for 15 years

member

9 Poems

9 Comments

0 Followers

Most recent

Sopdet

Posted Mar 30, 2010 · 14 lines · 1 critiques

The brightest star in the sky
rising before the flooding of the Nile.
Bringer of fertility
great harvest of wheat and grain
Behold the lute bearer
for the queen of heaven
and the Goddess Hathor
open the Nile in the sky.
she who is the brightest
consort of Sah.
Great manifestation of Isis
like a sun behind a sun
lighting up the night sky.

For Hexebah

ZARRANO’s timeline

June 2026
06 Sat

Anniversary
15 years of membership
June 2021
06 Sun

Anniversary
10 years of membership
June 2016
06 Mon

Anniversary
5 years of membership
June 2012
06 Wed

Anniversary
One year of membership
June 2011
06 Mon

Joined Neopoet
Membership begins

First poem published 1 days later.
May 2010
12 Wed

Received a critique
on The Chemistry Of Character from @BlueBerry
"The poems flows from one line to the next with perfect elegance. It's beautiful and touching. I love it!"
March 2010
30 Tue

Received a critique
on Sopdet from @Candlewitch
"I am much drawn to the Egyptian Pantheon. This poem is elegant, informational, and attention grabbing. Keep up the good work. Always, Cat"
30 Tue

Posted a poem
Sopdet
"The brightest star in the sky"
Open thread 14 lines
February 2010
16 Tue

Received a critique
on Somebody's Darling from @Candlewitch
"I like the way the rhyme seems so free and easy. A lovely love poem! Always, Cat"
16 Tue

Received a critique
on Soul Seeker from @Candlewitch
"There are some great questions within this poem. The questions that I often think about. Nicely constructed, too. Always, Cat"
14 Sun

Received a critique
on To One So Far Away from @magics02
"Thanks Pauly for your response, let me make this clearer, your poem says you wanted raw truth that is the only way I commented on the caps. Yes you can put them wherever you choose, I looked it back over and noticed the…"
13 Sat

Received a critique
on The Chemistry Of Character from @magics02
"You touch me with this one new friend. Magnifico!! Magics02 "Determination Brings Success""
13 Sat

Received a critique
on To One So Far Away from @magics02
"I sat there right beside you facing the moon like Cher in Moonstruck La Luna she shouted(love that movie) and I felt your pain and dried your tears. When love runs out and trys to come back many years later, you find th…"
13 Sat

Received a critique
on Somebody's Darling from @magics02
"I just got to say this one is lovely and I was stumped on a couple of words here...stupefy?also curiousity check the spellcheck if you wish and then seal this one with a kiss Magics02 "Determination Brings Success""
13 Sat

Posted a poem
Somebody's Darling
"I stare off at the castles in the air"
Open thread 18 lines
11 Thu

Posted a poem
Soul Seeker
"Distance Is but a fragment of space"
Open thread 17 lines
10 Wed

Critiqued
"Heart Pain" by @Race_9togo
"Great poem written with much feeling, my father in 1988 at the age of 74 had a quad by pass, I was 19 and I am the baby from 9 kids my father was a ww2 vet and had some rough years raising a big family he had at least 3…"
09 Tue

Posted a poem
The Chemistry Of Character
"Passion reigns supreme"
Open thread 22 lines
02 Tue

Critiqued
"Implosion" by @Candlewitch
"Great poem I have had some bad headaches in my life but nothing is worse then a migraine. Enjoyed your poem well written. Paul"
02 Tue

First critique offered
on "Implosion" by @Candlewitch
January 2010
31 Sun

Posted a poem
The Queen Of Ghosts
"Oh Goddess of the crossroads"
Open thread 18 lines
26 Tue

Posted a poem
The Heretic
"Pharaoh of most noblest blood"
Open thread 20 lines
13 Wed

Posted a poem
To One So Far Away
" I awake in the sparkly morning that still held the night's chill"
Open thread 19 lines
12 Tue

Posted a poem
Wicked Moon Beams
"So wicked are the nights under the moons glow"
Open thread 17 lines
06 Wed

First publication
The Goddess Of Athens
06 Wed

Posted a poem
The Goddess Of Athens
"Dawn spreads across Athens"
Open thread 30 lines