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brittle light
By brittle light, 30 November, 2010

a confirmed recluse
his own shadow annoys him
living in the dark

brittle light

brittle light

14 years 7 months ago

I will use your suggestion.

I will use your suggestion."living in the dark"... much more fluid and Haiku-ish
I knew this numbering thing would confuse...I had decided to stop titleing haiku
and for some reason even I can't fathom, started with #7. I don't belive the order these are read is
relevent ...no sequence was intended

thanks for stopping by

Edevold

Edevold

14 years 7 months ago

I like this .....

a nice image..... I have a friend who chainsawed down a tree across his driveway to keep visitors out during a vacation week.....