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Historical Figures.
Submitted by weirdelf on Sat, 2017-06-17 17:59
Status:
Open to new participants
Start/end date:
Saturday, June 17, 2017 to Thursday, July 27, 2017
Contest description:
Description: A free verse poem not to exceed 28 lines (not counting stanza breaks) about somebody who changed history
Sponsor(s): scribbler, Geezer and Pugilist
Objectives: to have fun and stretch wings
Subject matter: Historical figures
How Judged: Very important to put (June Contest) in the title and submit to the Stream
https://www.neopoet.com/contest/historical-figures-0
lovedly
8 years ago
Hitler changed the history of the world
my mom changed
my/our familys
life's history
do I qualify
weirdelf
8 years ago
no
no
weirdelf
8 years ago
but your poetry about someone who changed history
would certainly qualify.
Keith Logan
8 years ago
My Hero
I guess I’m my own hero,
my life's explained this way --
I always say just what I mean;
mean seldom what I say.
Philosophy for living?
Stated piously --
life is simply far too short
to take it seriously.
OK, it's not free verse, but is as close as this inveterate rhymer can manage. Just sharing.
weirdelf
8 years ago
that was 6 lines.
interested about who you will choose for 28 lines about someone who has changed history. A real person.
Really interesting to me, Keith, is that you almost paraphrase a childhood fictional hero of mine, James Bond-
"Life is too short to spend time prolonging it."
Keith Logan
8 years ago
My chilhood heroes
Alfred E. Neuman: What, me worry? Exemplary attitude.
Bugs Bunny: Eh, what's up doc? He was always unflappable.
weirdelf
8 years ago
oh, I don't see rhyme as a problem in freeverse
should probably not be a consistent structured rhyme.
Stan?
scribbler
8 years ago
Rhyme
Is certainly acceptable but the judge is looking for free verse which likely precludes a structured form. And the subject should be about a Known historic figure......BTW the 28 lines is a maximum not a requirement so shorter poem is perfectly acceptable........stan
weirdelf
8 years ago
I'm actually
beginning to start thinking about the merest possibility of speculating on the tiniest chance of even considering the microscopic whimsical urge to actually submit a poem to a contest, maybe.
Just cause I love the topic so much.
scribbler
8 years ago
hi Jess
Best get a move on it. contest about to end
weirdelf
8 years ago
27th July?
Time yet.
Keith Logan
8 years ago
A Long Time Ago
I thought I already posted this? (twenty eight lines exactly, counting the spaces)
One fine day
around the year one or two
(though it was not called that, then)
a male child was born, they named him Jesus
(at least that’s the modern equivalent).
By all accounts he was a happy child,
inclined to be a bit studious
but what is wrong with that?
He trained to be a carpenter,
which came in handy much later
when he had to join two timbers into a T
which would carry his weight.
Unlettered was a description some gave but my he could spin a good yarn.
Not just any old tale but moral narratives that slid into memory.
I mean, man he could tell a story.
He was a good man, a kind man, even children were drawn to him.
You would believe none could take offense!
But some did!
My, didn’t they just!
Long story - short
They hung him up on that T to die.
Not the Jewish way. They only hung up the dead
and only then till dusk.
scribbler
8 years ago
Hi Keith
Please post on stream with (June contest) next to title. appreciate your entering........stan