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weirdelf
By weirdelf, 19 June, 2017
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Historical Figures.
Submitted by weirdelf on Sat, 2017-06-17 17:59
Status:
Open to new participants
Start/end date:
Saturday, June 17, 2017 to Thursday, July 27, 2017
Contest description:

Description: A free verse poem not to exceed 28 lines (not counting stanza breaks) about somebody who changed history

Sponsor(s): scribbler, Geezer and Pugilist

Objectives: to have fun and stretch wings

Subject matter: Historical figures

How Judged: Very important to put (June Contest) in the title and submit to the Stream
https://www.neopoet.com/contest/historical-figures-0

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

8 years ago

My Hero

I guess I’m my own hero,
my life's explained this way --
I always say just what I mean;
mean seldom what I say.

Philosophy for living?
Stated piously --
life is simply far too short
to take it seriously.

OK, it's not free verse, but is as close as this inveterate rhymer can manage. Just sharing.

weirdelf

weirdelf

8 years ago

that was 6 lines.

interested about who you will choose for 28 lines about someone who has changed history. A real person.

Really interesting to me, Keith, is that you almost paraphrase a childhood fictional hero of mine, James Bond-
"Life is too short to spend time prolonging it."

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

8 years ago

My chilhood heroes

Alfred E. Neuman: What, me worry? Exemplary attitude.
Bugs Bunny: Eh, what's up doc? He was always unflappable.

S

scribbler

8 years ago

Rhyme

Is certainly acceptable but the judge is looking for free verse which likely precludes a structured form. And the subject should be about a Known historic figure......BTW the 28 lines is a maximum not a requirement so shorter poem is perfectly acceptable........stan

weirdelf

weirdelf

8 years ago

I'm actually

beginning to start thinking about the merest possibility of speculating on the tiniest chance of even considering the microscopic whimsical urge to actually submit a poem to a contest, maybe.
Just cause I love the topic so much.

Keith Logan

Keith Logan

8 years ago

A Long Time Ago

I thought I already posted this? (twenty eight lines exactly, counting the spaces)

One fine day
around the year one or two
(though it was not called that, then)
a male child was born, they named him Jesus
(at least that’s the modern equivalent).

By all accounts he was a happy child,
inclined to be a bit studious
but what is wrong with that?

He trained to be a carpenter,
which came in handy much later
when he had to join two timbers into a T
which would carry his weight.

Unlettered was a description some gave but my he could spin a good yarn.
Not just any old tale but moral narratives that slid into memory.
I mean, man he could tell a story.

He was a good man, a kind man, even children were drawn to him.
You would believe none could take offense!
But some did!
My, didn’t they just!

Long story - short
They hung him up on that T to die.
Not the Jewish way. They only hung up the dead
and only then till dusk.

S

scribbler

8 years ago

Hi Keith

Please post on stream with (June contest) next to title. appreciate your entering........stan