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LaurelSWinters
Member since September 22, 2019
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Only My Heart Knows
My heart knows what I need;
It whispers your name,
Like a sweet melody.
It dances passed my ear drum,
Like music, a bliss, endless pleasure.
My heart knows what I want;
You skin wrapped around my bones,
Enveloping me.
LaurelSWinters’s timeline
- September 2024
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22 SunAnniversary
5 years of membership
- September 2020
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22 TueAnniversary
One year of membership
- September 2019
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25 WedReceived a critique
on Only My Heart Knows from @c lynn brooks
"the suggestions and corrections already made might I add mine instead of like a sweet melody perhaps use as in place dancing past might work in conjunction with the previous line" -
24 TueReceived a critique
on Only My Heart Knows from @Geezer
"moonman; Welcome to the site! I hope that you will find the things that you need here. Feel free to ask questions, join workshops and enter the monthly contests. I liked the brevity of your work and the title was okay…" -
22 SunReceived a critique
on Only My Heart Knows from @themoonman
"Welcome to the site! You chose a nice little poem to begin. There are a couple of suggestions I want to make ... "a bliss" should be "a blissful" and I would drop that last line, "enveloping me" as the previous line say…" -
22 SunFirst publication
Only My Heart Knows
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About Me
About me
I am a university student who loves to write. I want to help and inspire people and share my story.
Location: Ontario, Canada
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Rupi Kapur
Amanda Lovelace
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