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loved
By loved, 13 July, 2012

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Ian.T

Ian.T

13 years ago

Loved

Your works are, in this vein, excellent, I am not sure where you wander sometimes when the words fail to impress.
This is where you sit and let thought become restricted by reason, and the perception of your fellow travellers thoughts..
I think even the great Elf of the "Antipodes" will be pleased with this one lol.
I can see him now with Kookaburra on his cork less hat chasing the flies from his face as he tries to comment on this piece, good to see him back though I shall await his read of this one..
Meanwhile Loved, take care, Yours Ian.T

loved

loved

13 years ago

Loved

Loved

Your works are, in this vein, excellent, I am not sure where you wander sometimes when the words fail to impress.
This is where you sit and let thought become restricted by reason, and the perception of your fellow travellers thoughts..
I think even the great Elf of the "Antipodes" will be pleased with this one lol.
I can see him now with Kookaburra on his cork less hat chasing the flies from his face as he tries to comment on this piece, good to see him back though I shall await his read of this one..
Meanwhile Loved, take care, Yours Ian.T

i love this loved

but i would drop all the 'ands' - just me
love judy