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loved
By loved, 15 December, 2010

Now I know why no one has
Visited my page
All are having coffee at this age,
At Tim Horton’s and Wal-Mart’s
McDonalds
And Fair View Malls
And
So many snacks at your place,
Do not disturb,
I mean do not interfere
In what I eat.

A doc friend of mine,
Told a silly guy,
Don’t eat this
Don’t eat that
Tis sugar here
and there's fat
And
So what do I do doc
Tell me that
That’s upto you
got that?

The guy was given
Three weeks at the most
He lives 19 years eating
Like a ghost
The doc rests in peace
Where?
There!

Eduardo Cruz

Eduardo Cruz

14 years 7 months ago

Loved

you said coffee so here i am, so where's the coffee. keep in mind that i'm a Nueyor-rican and a true drinker of coffee, if you want me to come back I need my Peruvian mountain grown coffee. Hahaha!
I love the lightness of this write. talk about poetic justice, poor Doctor ate himself to death.
thanks very enjoyable
Eddie

loved

loved

14 years 7 months ago

thanks ur welcome

when i was a younger kid
my ma'am told me to come over to her place
and i was to carry a flask full of coffee
ditto for you .
hahahahahahahahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
ur taste
my pocket
ok free poem for thee

mand

mand

14 years 7 months ago

Now you've hit my weakness!

Cup of coffee sounds great! Just like your poem.

Guess what? I'm going to have a coffee.

Love Mand xxxxxxxxxx